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“Striking” by Shawn Marks

“Striking” by Shawn Marks
December 8, 2020 Nā Leo Literary Review

The lightning struck in the distance, upon a shivering wave.

Lightning struck when I looked at her. Light splashed upon her face.

The lightning struck and rumbled deep with a crack just seconds later.

The lightning whipped and burned the shore to make an ugly crater.

I ran when the lightning struck the sand. I left the girl, which was fine.

Not a twinge of guilt when it struck her; the thundering close behind.

I didn’t feel bad when the lightning struck as she lay in disrepair because I said

“Follow me!” when the lightning struck, but she wanted to stay and stare.

Artist’s Statement:

“I thought of Striking when I was thinking back to a night where I was sitting on the beach with my friend. Lighting and thunder were striking the water out in the distance. My imagination started flowing, and I thought of an image of the lightning hitting us or the ground near us.

This piece is also about a more significant concept: don’t blame yourself for things that aren’t your fault. If bad things happen despite your best effort to help or prevent them, it’s not your fault. This character over exaggerates a chill attitude that some people have. I am not one of those people.”

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